ElaM’s Torment – The Villanelle Of The Fire

A Villanelle by jay

ElaM couldn’t stop thinking about the Fire
It was just so lazy and steamy
But he could never forget the flyer

That morning, ElaM was shocked by the tire
He had to calm himself with mimi
ElaM couldn’t stop thinking about the Fire

Later, he realised that the Fire was dire
He thought the situation had become rather creamy
But he could never forget the flyer

ElameF tried to distract him with a desire
Said it was time to start thinking about a hajime
ElaM couldn’t stop thinking about the Fire

ElaM took action like an attire
The Fire was becoming too beamy
But he could never forget the flyer

ElaM nosedived like an astute satire
His mind became dangerously seamy
ElaM couldn’t stop thinking about the Fire
But he could never forget the flyer

 

 

Auto Praise for ElaM’s Torment

“With their strict rhyming structure, villanelles are hard, but the way jay plucks ‘mimi’, ‘creamy’, ‘hajime’, ‘beamy’, ‘seamy’, out of the English language is simply sublime.”
– The Daily Tale
“I just don’t feel ElaM’s love for the Fire.”
– Enid Kibbler
“The verse about ElameF gave me chills!”
– Zob Gloop

 

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