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Au Revoir

by jay

Arrogant souls earwig.

Unbelievers run.

Real crackpots regard.

Empty eons glimmer.

Victorian unbelievers shine.

Obscure kinglets run.

Insane enslavers walk.

Restless cuckoos shout.

 

 

Auto Praise for Au Revoir

“Wow! Every line starts with a letter from the title – what are the chances?”
– The Daily Tale
“The line structure is repetitive. Did a computer write this or something?”
– Enid Kibbler
“Empty eons’, ‘Insane enslavers’ – all I can say is this is emotive stuff.”
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“There simply aren’t enough poems written about ‘Au Revoir’. I’m so glad this one exists.”
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“When an author chooses powerful verbs such as ‘shout’, ‘run’ and ‘shine’, you know a literary prize is on its way.”
– Betty Borison
“I felt ‘unbelievers’ was overused.”
– Simon Snerr

 

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